I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Alex. I enjoyed reading your beach story. It's nice that you went as a family. I've been camping but that was with school. I have noticed that you have used a lot of 'and then'.Maybe next time you could try and use a different selection of words that mean the same thing.
Hello Alex. I enjoyed reading your beach story. It's nice that you went as a family. I've been camping but that was with school. I have noticed that you have used a lot of 'and then'.Maybe next time you could try and use a different selection of words that mean the same thing.
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