I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Alex, Nice shout out! Did you share it with your mum at all? I bet she would love to see it! Here's a tip for next time - keep the camera still that way the audience can really focus on what you are saying! Great work. - Miss Morgan
Hello Alex, This is a very good shout out! Maybe Next time you could start saying the words when its about 6 seconds in. How much money does your mum give you when you finish your stuff? Thanks have a great day ;)
Hey Alex,
ReplyDeleteNice shout out! Did you share it with your mum at all? I bet she would love to see it!
Here's a tip for next time - keep the camera still that way the audience can really focus on what you are saying!
Great work.
- Miss Morgan
Hello Alex, This is a very good shout out! Maybe Next time you could start saying the words when its about 6 seconds in. How much money does your mum give you when you finish your stuff? Thanks have a great day ;)
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