Opening sentence for my story

Welcome to my blog everyone
write an interesting first sentence to hook our reader 
my first sentence was  The boy was playing a game on his xbox.
this is my improred sentence Bang, bang! The shots fired in the boy’s video game.
k my updated sentence is
sentence hook my

Animals in the zoo

Hello everybody. 

In reading we have been learning about zoos and animals. We have to have an opinion on whether we think zoos are good or bad. I think they are good and you can read my reasons below.

I feel good about the work I have done because it is nice to learn about new stuff everyday.