IllustratedBurnet Beckett Aidan walk to school with his green back when he got to school he kicked the robotic and whistled then he bought something his favourite thing. and his backpack and then when they went to go run and the teacher but all the bugs and one pile they didn't know which ones the so the teacher said that weekend open all the bags and. see which ones which so keep it one by one until there was two bags left and then and they open. onemorebag they knew who the last bag was was Aidan's bag so then the ticket fruit to him and .he catching it and then it wants it come on everyone everyone got that bags opened and we want. to see what season inside his bag so he better grin on his face and then opened his bag.
Hello Alex.
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you have written so much.You've got some great ideas.
Maybe next time you could re-read your work to make sure that it makes sense.
I know it's hard when we say some words and can't quite hear the end sounds.
For example-Aidan walked to school.The word walk needs ed on the end.
I hope I have helped a little.